Subject: Heh, yeah...
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Posted on: 2014-12-07 23:14:00 UTC

My dad's always the one to point out flaws like that in my writing, like Mary Sues and Magic Pockets XD He's always very gentle about it, but he's usually right as well.

Though having said that, my Sue was something of a bit-part Sue. She wasn't in every chapter by a long shot, but when she did show up, there was no one faster, tougher or cooler. Although there were quite a few characters who didn't like her that much...not sure if that alleviates the Sue-ness or not. I must read more PPC to find out! XD

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