Phoenix was red, not blue like Phenex

Chapter 1 is up! by 7.65x54R on 2014-09-29 12:00:00 UTC Reply

It's quite likely that you missed my beta request crowdsource attempt because no-one replied to it.

Ah well, I've been working on a fic based off of Shin Megami Tensei: Persona (Specifically 3, but takes a few mechanics and 2 characters from the original).

I eventually got a beta reader and released the first chapter yesterday, and I got 9 views that night!

Anyone want to read?
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10721577/1/Persona-Alpha

....And so is chapter two. by 7.65x54R on 2014-10-04 03:49:00 UTC Reply

the second chapter Is shorter and mostly serves as exposition for the velvet room. it also introduces 1 new character and elaborates on another.
That looks promising. Also sorry for not beta-ing it by James Shields on 2014-09-29 18:28:00 UTC Reply

I am having some technical issues with documents for a while.
Still, I definitely should have sent you something notifying you about it. I am glad you found someone apparently more knowledgeable in the matter than me and were able to get it up
and running.

Persona Alpha looks good. I like the mixing of early Persona games elements such as Philemon with Persona 3 ones such as the Dark Hour.

Just clear me up on something. wasn't Senna's persona supposed to be Phoenix of the Sun Arcana or was it spelled differently in the early Personas?

thanks! by 7.65x54R on 2014-09-29 22:49:00 UTC Reply

It's completely fine.

Also, Phenex has never actually appeared in a persona title before. It's actually a misspelling/variant of phoenix that was used in the Lesser key of Solomon (I'm going for a demonology theme with this fic's personae).

Ok then by James Shields on 2014-09-29 23:42:00 UTC Reply

The description seemed to fit Phoenix from Persona 3 and 4, so that's probably why I got them mixed up.

Phoenix was red, not blue like Phenex by 7.65x54R on 2014-10-02 19:29:00 UTC Reply

Also, anyone else like my story? chapter 2 will be up soon.