Subject: Great job.
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Posted on: 2016-07-14 15:26:00 UTC
I like the parts where you said to do a complement sandwich and to wait if something drives you up the wall.
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Brand new workshop is up! by
on 2016-07-13 00:59:00 UTC
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Took me long enough.
As I mentioned in a thread a few weeks ago, I was working on a brand new workshop all about writing reviews. And lo and behold, it is here! Click this link to check it out and maybe pick up some tidbits about reviews. As always, there is an associated challenge with it. This particular one ties in nicely with our monthly challenge, which can be seen at the top of the main Board page.
Many thanks to Neshomeh for providing beta work and giving helpful insight.
Go forth and write well! -
Great job. by
on 2016-07-14 15:26:00 UTC
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I like the parts where you said to do a complement sandwich and to wait if something drives you up the wall.
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Hooray! by
on 2016-07-13 10:39:00 UTC
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First thought: Yeah, another workshop.
Second thought: Aw, no story-writing exercise. I liked the opportunities to write about my agents not needing Permission.
Third thought: Huzzah, I don’t need to chase those opportunities anymore. Still, coming up with something fitting before the thread drops down too far is always an exciting challenge.
Does this count as at least two points of praise and two points of criticism beyond notes about SPaG? This certainly doesn’t.
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Aha! by
on 2016-07-13 02:42:00 UTC
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Read your other workshops, too, which were all brilliant. This one is also, fittingly enough, brilliant.
I mean, this is all great advice, and you just give it, and it's easy to understand and not a pain to slog through.
Organised into paragraphs, not written like a scientific report, useful examples, and all.
I'll probably bookmark this for when I review stuff.
This doesn't meet the standards of a review in the workshop. Bugger. Sorry about that.