For some reason, despite being a member of the wiki, it would not let me add it to the list at the time. Thanks for adding that blasted thing.

Hi,

I've added the first badfic to the Unclaimed Badfic list. If anyone figures out whether the second one is also a badfic, let me know, and I'll add that too.

I know nothing about YGO, but that was the most. Confusing. Summary. *Ever*.

~DawnFire

My memories of the Full House canon are a bit sketchy (I was only conscious about half the time when it wasn't airing reruns... Or was it?), but I'm pretty sure they made Stephanie a little too innocent little girl-ish. Wasn't she a bit more... spunky? One of those cute-with-a-tongue-sharper-than-a-steak-knife deals, wasn't she?

Seriously, I read further, and my mind started to shut down. I think some of the Aura of Smooth seeped out of the fic and onto me, because I caught myself thinking once or twice, 'Well, it's not THAT bad. I mean, it could be worse..." Then I hit myself over the with the Lightning Thief, saying (quietly, so I did not disturb the family) "OUT DAMNED SUE!" If the Sue had grabbed me, I was going to make sure she did not stay inside.
(You think he's kidding. He really isn't. He hit himself over the head with the book in a form of self-exorsism. It was supposed to be more of a ritual then anything, but it helped clear his mind and look at the fic for what it was. Trust me, I should know: I'm living in his head.)

Anyway, in case it is not clear, I want this thing dead based off premise alone. However, I do not currently have permission, and do not feel that seeking permission at this time would be a good idea. I'm not sure if I am a good enough writer, and I don't have a huge amount of free time at the moment. However, I would be highly interested in a co-write mission with someone who does know Percy Jackson, so I can get my feet wet, and perhaps get a feel for writing missions. Mostly though, I want the Sue dead.

Ouch.

Also, I've added this *lovely* bit of...litera*booom*

Ok, I guess my keyboard couldn't take the lie. I've now replaced it. Anyway, as I was saying: I've added this badfic to the list of Unclaimed Badfic on the wiki, along with your comments; hope that's alright with you :)

~DawnFire

*Sigh* Curse the fact that there are good looking dwarves in the movie.

He is very protective of his daughter, manipulating time to make sure she can evade danger. The moron of a Sue looked directly into Medusa's eyes because she was curious, and Kronos appeared AS A PHYSICAL BEING, and stopped her from turning to stone. I'm going to say Kronos would be able to see agents, either because he is a Titan, or due to his lack of being chopped in hundreds of pieces and trapped in Tartarus in this fic making him a replacement too.

Her grandmother is Tethys, the titaness of the sea. Ladies and gentleman, not only are the Titans, who both in cannon and in mythology are trapped in Tartarus and cannot escape, having demi-titan kids, but the gods don't bat an eye. Worse, she snares Apollo into loving her.

Annabeth is very OOC, becoming a touchy-feely emotional girl (if she gives a reaction at all) who acts more like a daughter of Aphrodite then Athena. At one point she becomes disgusted at the idea of killing somebody (Percy, due to being the child of Kronos, is to be killed if she acts up), despite the fact canon!Annabeth has been trained all her life to kill monsters like replacement!Percy, and in the final battle kills rebel demigods without hesitation.

Grover is pushed to the side as "the goat who freaks out, but we don't really hear about even when he is freaking out." As such, he is fairly OOC, but not near as bad as Annabeth.

Then there's Apollo... This lovestruck loon picks up not only the luv bug, but the idiot ball, even forgetting the fact that he is an almighty god of the sun and could teleport out of a bad situation. Yeah. However, mission wise, he seems to have part of his canon self still inside him, as he gives these gems:
"She was petite and delicate looking, long brown lashes framed beautiful golden-colored eyes and—
Whoa—Apollo stopped himself before he can go further. What was he doing checking a twelve year old girl out?"
and:
"'I'll talk to them about it, they will listen to me." Apollo said firmly, in a rare moment of seriousness Percy looked genuinely surprised that he would do that for her; he didn't fault her. He himself was confused as to why he even volunteered for someone he didn't know except in his dreams."

Still, up to the person who does the mission, if they think it is bad enough to do a mission. Mechanically, the fic is bad, but not atrocious. However, for the amount of cannon it brutally murders, I believe it is bad enough under the Canon Protection Initiative to be itself brutally murdered.