Subject: Having read the mission...
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Posted on: 2016-06-22 22:03:00 UTC
I stand by my gut reaction: it's not realistic to expect each and every PPC staffer to be tolerant of gay people, so there shouldn't be a problem with Natalie being homophobic. Further, and frankly: "it's an interesting trait" is a legit reason when it comes to experimentation with characters — I made the Librarian racist just because, and if that's nothing to complain about, then neither is Natalie's homophobia. To address the marginalisation point, I'd like to say that homophobia can be a marginal trait of a character, just like every other trait. Not all people will make it or have it made central to their character and I don't think it's realistic to expect that to be the case here.
Aside from this whole thing:
-There's a weird grey thing in the background that makes the mission a bit hard to read.
-The execution scene is well-written, in my opinion.
-I like the shout out title.