Subject: Back after my lapse.
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Posted on: 2013-07-16 23:57:00 UTC

The whirring sound quickly increased in volume after #13's efforts sent the nearest of the dome's segments collapsing to the ground. Zeltar looked up just in time to see a small squad of creatures emerging from the forest ahead of them, the whirring sound from earlier growing even louder as they came closer, propelled through the air by a collection of limb-like structures that formed propellors at the uppermost point on each one's body.
The creatures seemed to largely consist of a massive triangle-shaped cephalothorax, similarv in appearance to a pyramid, but with only three sides rather than four. Each side held a single eye and a lipless mouth, and the majority of those lipless mouths were opened in cries of rage.

"They broke the dome! The dome is broken now!" shouted one of the creatures, which seemed to be on the verge of hysterics.

"ERROR: a section of the dome wall has collapsed! Overall efficiency of dome for containment decreased by twelve to fifteen percent! CALCULATING EXACT DAMAGE." announced a second one of the triangular-headed creatures.

"Trespassing entities! Cease motion and repair the destruction that you have caused!" shouted a third, who unlike the others seemed to be less affected by the collapsing of the wall and more by the fact that it was done deliberately. It swooped toward them, followed by eight of its brethren. About a dozen more were still flying around the upper reaches of the trees, including the other two speakers, and a continued whirring in the trees suggested that more were coming.

Zeltar leapt into the air and snapped its claws at one of the attacking creatures. Its left claw gripped his aggressors's propellor, causing the creature to lose its balance, and with a yelp, it fell to the ground, carrying Zeltar with it. As they hit the ground, the impact knocked open one of the scorpionlike being's packs, sending assorted small gizmos and curiosities flying onto the grassy ground of the jungle dome.

Zeltar, taking advantage of the creature's brief moment of surprise, spread out his limbs and stuck them fast to the ground, attempting to pin the creature before it could get airborne again. Unfortunately, his opponent's unfamiliar body shape made it difficult for Zeltar to distribute his weight effectively, and the creature easily threw him off, hopping away on a set of previously folded-up pseudopods and glaring at Zeltar.

"Approximately thirty percent flight efficiency lost as the result of aggressive action!" it snapped. "Launching countermeasures!" Fully extending the psuedopods underneath it, the creature launched itself at Zeltar, positioning itself so that its propellor, which had begun to spin alomst as fast as it had when the creature was airborne, was aimed directly at Zeltar's head. The scorpionlike being tensed its porganic muscles, pulling up its stinger tail to allow for a quick counterattack once the creature got within range.

Nearby, four of the nine attacking creatures surrounded the Goons, whirring, hissing, and shouting at varying volumes. The four remaining from the attack party spread out around the eight trespassers, ready to swoop in and back up any one of their fellows that might need it. Two of the inner four, acting on small signals from the others in their party, dove straight for Goon #8.

((Bluh, sub-par fight scene writing is sub-par. You get the picture, though. Creatures attack! Number and placement of opponents! What do you do?))

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