Subject: The nitpicking never ends
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Posted on: 2016-06-04 11:16:00 UTC

Well, it’s mostly in dialogue and thus may be intentional:

I didn’t expected to be buying this... but, then again, I didn’t expect this to be your job.
Should be "expect".

Why I am not surprised?
Word order should be "Why am I... ".

Ok, aside from stuff we already charged for there isn’t nothing worthy to see...
The double negation means that there actually is something worthy to see.

Keiko nodded and opened a portal to Gryffindor common room.
Missing word "the"?

"I... kinda want to have a word with that book’s author. " Keiko said, raising a eyebrow.
"a" should be "an".

HG

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