Subject: Something Incoherent
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Posted on: 2013-07-10 21:23:00 UTC
I was trawling the ˆNarutoˆ fanfiction forum a while back, and happened on this:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9433362/1/Peace-Keepers
It's painful. And, like I said, tends towards incoherency. Just... Someone please introduce these girls to the actual Akatsuki?
Not the harem one, the absolutely ...ing horrible one? Guess what- here's the Avatar: the Last Airbender version.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4859660/1/Avatar-The-Last-Airbender-The-Unrated-and-Untold
Note that it's a different ff.net account this time- I'm fairly certain it's a case of multiple accounts, seeing as I did a search and found both stories under the same author on... urgh... hentai-foundry. >_
Like last time, this fic is not safe for work, brains, or humanity in general. Try not to hurl.
Someone burn this, quick. That's thinly-disguised PWP. Uck. Someone give me bleeprin.
I've never even read Naruto, and I can still tell that this is bad. I literally cannot even tell what is going on. That may be due to my lack of knowledge of the fandom, but then again, it may not.
As a casual reader of the series, I agree entirely with your assessment. My mind... bluh.
I can't even see what it was supposed to be going for...
My old bag of NM&NMs was running out. Thank you.