Subject: Nicely done!
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Posted on: 2013-01-25 20:47:00 UTC

I'm waiting for the second part now. You really pinned down the ShadowClan cats' personalities. I get rather annoyed with people's tendencies to turn them into B-movie villains instead of cats with their own personalities and (hostile) culture.

Dedicated Warriors agents should probably be carrying small digital voice recorders. One assumes that since the Warriors cats talk, they should be able to record their voices...? Or maybe, since cat language involves so much body language and not much noise, a video recorder would be needed?

What does Warriors do with cat romance, by the way? I know that in real life, cat romance simply doesn't exist--they just go into heat, mate, and go on with their lives; the closest cat relationship is the bond between friends, siblings, or mother and kitten. Does the series stay consistent with that, or do they add human-like pair bonding? Or do they just ignore it altogether? I've only read a few of the books, and kittens seem to just belong to their mothers, with fathers mostly out of the picture.

By the way, you have a typo in "...sent Sorrelpaw of to get Cherrystar..." There's an f missing in "off".

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