Subject: Welcome back
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Posted on: 2016-05-08 11:19:00 UTC
It's always good to see another of your stories.
Yup, I found nothing to nitpick upon, but I wanted to comment anyway. 'cause otherwise my name wouldn't be on the front page, and we can't have that :-)
HG
This took waaay too long considering it's another short one, but real life and stuff happened. :/
Anyway.
The Aviator and Zeb are once again sent into Avatar: The Last Airbender to deal with Aang's twin sister. Many facepalms were to be had.
And the mission turned out fantastic. As always.
Wow. That was quite the display of stupidity there. Good work, and I can hardly blame Alex for chickening out in advance.
Also, I'm glad you're getting your groove back. Does this mean you'll be available for beta-reading as well? I'm almost done with an extremely belated first interlude for my characters, and I just need someone to look over it and make sure everything makes sense.
It was a truly brain-melting fic and I still feel like the excerpts didn't do it justice.
And sorry, no. I haven't beta read anything in... over a year, I think? Aside from odd projects here and there, since I'm busy with my own stuff.
And what a fic for you to return with! Another checklist Sue?
BTW, there was one error in the mission:
"And that would be our queue to leave,"
Homophone error. "Queue" is a line. The word you're looking for--a signal to act--is "cue."
And that is why I shouldn't write missions and play computer games at the same time. Thanks for the fix.
Yay, new mission! *reads*
It's always good to see another of your stories.
Yup, I found nothing to nitpick upon, but I wanted to comment anyway. 'cause otherwise my name wouldn't be on the front page, and we can't have that :-)
HG
And wow, that fic was dumb. Good to see it finally taken down!
Real life started kicking me while I was down, which is never fun. Had to stop writing for a while, but it's good to be doing it again.
And yeah, the fic was dumb. :/ At least it was only one chapter...
I don't have time to read this right now, but I'm happy to see you're getting your writing groove back. *hugs*
Does this mean now is a good time to query you about furthering our plans concerning a certain purple alien lady? I've been resisting asking her questions in the Mailbox Game since it started, since it would probably be better for us to talk via e-mail or something. {= )
~Neshomeh
And I think we also had that one cowrite we were planning on doing as well?
Feel free to ask away but I'll shoot you an email in the meantime.
Alex, that glitterbag was simple, even funny. If you really intend to got to the field, you've got to accept seeing some depleasant things.
Farilan is also sexist? Will she ever develop any quality... Ah nope, Andalite. People like and Aximili, Elfangor and Aldrea are already using up all the good in the species.
Zeb should try to use this voice talent to take out the glitterbag someday. I'm sure there is something potentially funny to exploit here.
P.S.: Like you said, stuff happened, and there was no returnbie thread, so... Here are your gifts: a pot of black-hole coffee and a self-updating guidebook of all the deathtraps in the multiverse.
He'll tag along on a mission... someday.
And yeah, in Andalite culture, it's generally "men go into the military, women become scientists" so she's got pretty strong opinions about how things should be done.
Hm... next mission will involve Ix and Lottie, but after that, I'll see if I can put Zeb's talents to good use.
And thanks for the gifts. :)