Subject: JAAKSONS has a nice line of description.
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Posted on: 2013-08-14 15:15:00 UTC
From "Laurel":
The world flickered bizarrely before their eyes...
...and instead of two ugly Uruks in full war gear, they were suddenly faced by a pair of young girls, younger than Nenya but older than Rosie. There was a tall, gangly one with messy reddish hair and a shorter brunette wearing a pair of glasses. They both looked like assassins-turned-friendly, the effect rather disturbing.
“Hi,” the taller one volunteered. “I’m Jay.”
You probably can't go wrong using Bold Font's picture as a guide.
And yeah, five pages doesn't sound like very much to me, either. There's what, nine-ish panels per standard comic page, give or take depending on size? There's a lot of banter to work in... And the missions do get longer on average over time, so whatever you manage for the first one, you're going to need more for most of the rest. The only exception I can think of offhand is the one with Agent Dead, "Torment." We get a nice appearance from Dr. Fitzgerald in that one...
But, anyway. My two cents, there they are.
~Neshomeh