While narrative technique is important...

New mission! by Ellipsis Flood on 2012-12-30 23:29:00 UTC Reply

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Mission: Tri and a Half Force
Fandom: The Legend of Zelda
Warning: Someone drops an f-bomb.

I had a lot of fun with this one. Oh yes, I did.

Also, if anyone wants to have Shiek (he needs a new name), ask me.

You already know how I feel about the mission... by KittyNoodles on 2012-12-31 04:45:00 UTC Reply

...but Im'ma say it again just for the heck of it.

I LOVE THIS MISSION SO MUCH. Especially the lose root. And the genre-savvy Gerudo. And Shiek~
The more missions I read... by World-Jumper on 2012-12-31 01:06:00 UTC Reply

..the less cannon I realise I know. Oh well, I am not making fic at the moment, so I won't be ruining continuita. Still, I enjoied the mission. The fic did make me wonder though, what if there were two people worthy of the same peice of the triforce? Could it be split further? Who knows. Still, it seemed like the author was basing the 'birthmark' after Twilight Princess rather than orcania of time. I dont know, perhaps not, perhaps the author just can't keep their cannon in check.

Again, good mission, I enjoyed it, but there was one thing I missed: why was Shiek offered life in the ppc, rather than being killed outright? I know he did not do much to break cannon, but I usualy like to see how oc's manage to worm their way out of death. If it does not matter, then fine. Just like to know.

Also, double-check your posts' SPaG. by Ellipsis Flood on 2012-12-31 01:24:00 UTC Reply

And it's canon. A cannon shoots things. Even though there's a canon cannon.

My canon cannon is supirior to yours! by World-Jumper on 2012-12-31 02:13:00 UTC Reply

Y u hat my spllin? I dttr them anry of yu dum ppc peeps!!! Yu jus gellus oh mi skeel!!!! I ber then tokin evn. so dell wit it luzrs!!1!

Yeah, I realise I have a spelling problem, as well as grammar. I feel that a writer's true skill lies in how he tells the story, not nesecarily his spelling. Because of this, and my... reduced care when writing on forums, you may see some more errors from me then you should on posts. That and I am naturaly slower at typing then I should, so I make an attempt at haste which is unnecessary, and causes me to mess up from time to time. Still, I do try, and if I screw up too bad, calmly point it out so I can see what I did and try to remember for the future.

While narrative technique is important... by SeaTurtle on 2012-12-31 02:58:00 UTC Reply

...so is the author's methods of communicating the story.

Don't feel rushed when writing forum posts: always give your one hundred percent when writing! Avoid writing things by ear (as a native French speaker, seeing anglophones trying to write in French by sounding out syllables is painful) since it is rather unreliable. Don't hesitate to use autocorrect to catch obvious mistakes, but apply careful judgement to words you feel iffy about. I sometimes have trouble with particular words when typing up stories so I open up a new tab on my browser and consult online dictionaries.

But most importantly: read! It helps you keep your language skills sharp and exposes you to new words.

On Fron-says? by Huinesoron on 2012-12-31 08:06:00 UTC Reply

Djuh nuh comprond pass pour-kwa too deet sah! Mon Fron-says esst tress bee-anne!

(Also I'm not even very good at French... you might have guessed)

hS

*Sound of head exploding* (nm) by SeaTurtle on 2012-12-31 08:12:00 UTC Reply

He didn't really do anything wrong. by Ellipsis Flood on 2012-12-31 01:21:00 UTC Reply

Also, he was basically an accident.

This story... so hilarious. by SpecstacularSC on 2012-12-31 00:35:00 UTC Reply

Also: Dis pear... so delicious.

As for the hunting the miniboss thing: I do, but only because I'm a loot-farming grinding fiend.