Subject: I haven't particularly followed these two, but, uh...
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Posted on: 2016-02-13 19:05:00 UTC
OW.
That hurt to read. I could see the inspiration from Iroh's Tale.
Subject: I haven't particularly followed these two, but, uh...
Author:
Posted on: 2016-02-13 19:05:00 UTC
OW.
That hurt to read. I could see the inspiration from Iroh's Tale.
Actually... No! Let's move the pendulum a bit further than just ten years.
Bittersweet is the word I was looking for.
Alas, I have to report another typo:
And the fact that is was not very populated, at least not by humans, was an additional benefit.
Should be "it".
HG
It's sad, but good - bittersweet. And that's not a bad thing at all.
OW.
That hurt to read. I could see the inspiration from Iroh's Tale.
Talk about a mood whiplash.
And, er, on a less poignant note: 'sharing all that has happened since last year,'
I feel like the 'has' should be a 'had.'
Not that it takes away too much, but, y'know.
Being useful, and such.
I have failed you by not seeing that one!
And in all seriousness, mate, don't worry about it :D