Granted!

*throws cakefetti*

Your characters look solid, your grasp on PPC knowledge looks good, and I was entertained as I read the stories. I will note your SPaG was a bit shaky in places, but it's nothing a good going-over by a beta (or several) won't hopefully fix. You took the advice offered in your last few attempts and improved on it. While I don't know the continuum to make a call on the badfic, well. Badfic is badfic is badfic, and even without knowing the characters I think I can point out what's wrong with it.

So yes, third time's the charm indeed. Use your newfound power responsibly. :P