I saw a story in the review section one time...

A strange thing happened on Fanfiction.Net today... by LonelyStar on 2015-12-04 03:25:00 UTC Reply

I checked back in on one of my Frozen fanfics and found that someone had written a story. In the review section. I'm not kidding. There's eleven pages of review, and ten of them are taken up with what appears to be a story about Anna, Elsa, and their OC little sisters Faith and Hope, and as far as I know, it doesn't have anything to do with my story.

I haven't read it yet (the author hasn't really grasped paragraph breaks), and I'm confused about what to do. I've never seen this sort of thing before, or at least, I've never seen an author's note that asked people to stop writing stories in the reviews.

So, I've got two questions for you guys. First, has this happened to any of you before?

Second, what should I do with it? Delete it for taking up space, or keep it there? Let a PPC-er check it out for possible missioning?

If anyone wants to check it out, here's where it begins (there are some actual comments on my story on this page, but this is where the sub-story starts):

https://www.fanfiction.net/r/10975986/0/10/

I saw a story in the review section one time... by eatpraylove on 2015-12-08 03:09:00 UTC Reply

But it wasn't one of mine, so I didn't bother to save the link. (As I recall, the actual story wasn't so hot, either.)

The review you linked to honestly reminds me of this girl I used to watch on dA called "Becca Lupin". Maybe you've heard of her; she did parodies of Disney/Dreamworks movies with casts of other shows. Then it just spun into giant multiverse crossovers. AFAIK, she still does parodies, but starring her and, of all people, Gerard Way/his "Killjoy" alter ego (any MCR fans wanna explain that?).

Go ahead, spork it. It should be hilarious. >:)
Could I spork it? Or d'you wanna do that Star... by Silenthunder on 2015-12-05 15:44:00 UTC Reply

...since it was your fic she reviewed?

Go ahead. by LonelyStar on 2015-12-08 23:41:00 UTC Reply

I haven't watched Shrek, so I probably wouldn't be able to do a sporking justice.

Keep it.It's so strange that it's well worth the space (nm) by Cattomboy/Jebboy on 2015-12-04 13:22:00 UTC Reply

it's completely mission able too by Cattomboy/Jebboy on 2015-12-04 13:41:00 UTC Reply

The Oc is a complete Mary Sue Whose got Fire powers and I think is meant to be Elsa's twin. The author also seems to love run on sentences because there are so many like this one:

"Look at you, benevolent snow princess of Aren-delle! So many friends! Ha! They only like you better than me all because everybody and everybody else always complain about how annoying I just had to get, my nuttiness, craziness and insanity, they felt that I constantly make you suffer putting up with me, my stupidity and idiocy, my stubbornness, I'm always have to be the fault of the sisterly drama so everybody and everybody else always feels free to take your side over mine, side with you and be on your side!"

This Fic is a format changing crossover with Sherk by Cattomboy/Jebboy on 2015-12-04 13:55:00 UTC Reply

One of the two sues and a character replacement Anna go to Sherk and Fiona. Fiona talks about adopting the character replacement and Sue with Sherk. Not to mention the parts that randomly change to script format and the songs put into the fanfic.
The amount of strange in this fic grows more and more.

I also second (or third or whatev)... by SkarmorySilver on 2015-12-04 16:35:00 UTC Reply

...keeping and missioning the badfic, btw. It sounds ridiculous enough that a DIC team should be able to handle it with little trouble and even littler fanfare. XD
*snatches up mini in his talons* by SkarmorySilver on 2015-12-04 16:33:00 UTC Reply

The proper spelling is "Shrek", just fyi.

I wonder what minis from this continuum would be? Gingerbread men? Mini-Donkeys? Mini-Dronkeys, maybe??

Oops by cattomboy/jebboy on 2015-12-04 23:03:00 UTC Reply

I swore I typed Shrek.

And I'd vote for Gingerbread man or mini blind mouse.

Mini-Gingys would be fun, but remember... by Iximaz on 2015-12-04 23:05:00 UTC Reply

...whoever writes the first mission or the OFU for a particular canon gets to decide the mini type.

I also say keep it! by James Shields on 2015-12-04 12:33:00 UTC Reply

I have never seen or heard of something like this happening before either. And it looks pretty missionable too.

It would also probaly make for a pretty weird mission. Imagine the shock the agents would get from learning that someone wrote an entire fanfic on the comment section of another fanfic! XD

Also, let me just say that your story is looking pretty awesome, Star. Not that I had any doubts that it would be just that. I have always thought that you were a great writer ever since I first read Until The World Ends. Keep the good work! :D
Oh, yeah. I've heard of that... by ratbrainbasher on 2015-12-04 05:49:00 UTC Reply

But never on The Pit. Seen it on a few other sites, but most of them are troll/fanbrat magnets. But, yeah, I'd say keep it, if only for historical value.

Have you ever heard of Dwarf Fortress? A common pastime is to post small stories from really awesome games onto the forums. More than once have I seen someone turn one into a full-fledged fanfic, many of which are quite good.

Also, I looked it over. It definitely looks missionable. It's your comment, though, so you get the final say. (Not saying you made the comment, it's just on your fanfic)
I say keep it by emythos on 2015-12-04 04:32:00 UTC Reply

Just for the sheer weirdness factor. I mean, I've never heard of something like that happening.