Subject: It got worse further on, too.
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Posted on: 2015-11-23 14:42:00 UTC
Little Miss Sue would go on to lead a raid in Hogsmeade and take a bullet for a Death Eater, leading to more spankings from dear old Granddad... and then her Suvian mother shows up.
(The return of Frankenspot, more like XD)
In which the Aviator and Zeb take out a rather perverse Potterverse Sue.
Enjoy, guys. :)
Alex and Ave, and everything that's going on outside the badfic; certainly not Voldy and his non-canonical granddaughter.
But, is Zeb stuttering?
...and anyway, after we took care of the rest, we went to back to her response center...
And I'm not sure whether you actually meant "stared" in
He started in horror at the pile of wood...
HG
Glad you liked it, and thanks again for spotting the typos, as always. ^w^
-First, Librarian/Aviator shipping is no more a trolllship? These cowrites with Des will surely be interesting... (and a sonic which does wood? It value just skyrocketed.)
-French swearing is not so class, but eh, that's a native speaker viewpoint. Besides, it's not like English, where fantasy authors can just create new swearing for their world, forever lost in translation.
-Fifty Shades? If the Legendaries didn't kill his innocence that did it. (Will Dawn and you write this? That would be beyond bravery/masochism).
-So, she can visit her TARDIS? Happy for her.
-Alex, Aviator and Spot? critical hit to the feels, with One More attack.
All in all, your usual standard, awesome. Never stop writing.
P.S.: You forgot one word in "And don’t get me started on one I tackled with Dawn,".
-An appointment, right... still a massive immprovement over total hatred, though ( I get this one, that's why I talked bout it.)
-Didn't know it. I only watched the first, and I must admit, I agree with the Nostalgia's Critic position about the movie.
-I thought you found one, given the fact Zeb talked about a mass orgy ordered by Umbridge.
-Oh, more Baby? How many glitterbags have to be sacrificied in order to speed up the process?
-All-Out Attack, I'm very dead. Only way of toping this would be bringing back Mr. and Ms. Dives for a a discussion with their daughter.
Yes that was the word I was thinking about, didn't know this though. However, I must also admit that my grasp on English grammar is less than perfect, excuse me for pointing this out.
Wow I can not understand that at all.
And she has the last name of Riddle despite supposedly being Snape's daughter.
There is so much wrong with that Oc and I'be only started reading the mission. Glad it's dead.
Still pretty bad, though. :P It was definitely satisfying to take down.
I'm sure that honor goes to Rose 'Naked everywhere and somehow never got sick' Potter or little Miss Mary
So that was a pretty little atrocity of a fic...thank you for taking it down. Thank you very much.
(Also, a massive AWWWWW! for the ending. The return of Spot!)
Little Miss Sue would go on to lead a raid in Hogsmeade and take a bullet for a Death Eater, leading to more spankings from dear old Granddad... and then her Suvian mother shows up.
(The return of Frankenspot, more like XD)