Subject: Happy birthday!
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Posted on: 2012-12-19 20:14:00 UTC

And you're such a selfless person, you've given us a mission as a present on your special day!

You did an excellent job of fighting off the boring in this mission. You gave the agents and Mycroft enough to do and deal with to keep the mission's action moving, even while the badfic's action was . . . nonexistent.

Mycroft's private plothole was quite funny. I can almost imagine him arguing with the standard plothole to get better arrangements and see what was happening, and the plothole finally bowing down to his wishes. I'm also amused by the idea of Christianne posing as a nurse for some length of time waiting for Rosh Hashanananana to show up.

I also liked that the kids and dog all went different places to get cared for. It helps reinforce the fact that the PPC and its close allies are dedicated to helping harmed characters, in addition to fighting those causing the harm.

I'm curious about how Mycroft "is" the British government. That must be a BBC Sherlock thing, since I don't recall him wielding that sort of power in the original Holmes adventures.

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