Okay, so my mission is mostly done and should be finished by tomorrow. I am mostly asking now so that I am able to share the link as soon as it is ready.

The canon involved is Sailor Moon, and as I quoted specific
episodes, lines, scenes and such things, I need at least one person who knows it very well. I would also need people to check for SPaG and flow.

Fair warning: the fic being sporked features a child character being tortured and murdered by her own mother.