Subject: *still relate to one another (nm)
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Posted on: 2015-10-29 03:45:00 UTC
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New mission! by
on 2015-10-29 00:50:00 UTC
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Wherein the Aviator gets her probation officers. Enjoy!
(And before anyone shoots me for not including a Zeb reunion, that's in a WIP.) -
Yeah, back on the job by
on 2015-10-31 18:21:00 UTC
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And so am I.
Meanwhile, he around in his bag and took the D.O.R.K.S. out.
There’s a word missing.
I’m confused by the spare RA. What happened to the primary RA? Did the Librarian take it with him? I got the impression that Des had the RA and opened all the portals, so why would he need another RA to send the corpse to Romania?
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Fixed. by
on 2015-10-31 19:34:00 UTC
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The second bit was probably leftovers from an earlier version of the mission.
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That was nice. by
on 2015-10-29 21:40:00 UTC
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I liked it. Especially the ending with... Uh... Arinaviator? Three names in one, I'll go with this, and Des letting stuff out and having a shoulder to lean on. It was nice, they both deserve to start feeling better and this is starting to move in that direction.
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Bookmarked by
on 2015-10-29 13:01:00 UTC
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Looking forward to reading this later. I've already read some of Des's stuff so reading a collab should be interesting.
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Very good. by
on 2015-10-29 12:30:00 UTC
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I love both the more emotional moments and the humorous ones. It's good to see that despite all the changes, the humor is still there, too.
Also, since the Librarian callsRinathe Aviator "faker" on occasion, I'm now picturing him as Gilgamesh. -
Woohoo! by
on 2015-10-29 07:51:00 UTC
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First mission for Third Aviator and Cyber!Desdendelle, great to see them again. Yeah, life seems to like hit them with the spiky end of the stick. Don't give up guys, you still have your friends, and the Sues and the Flowers would be too happy.
Speaking of the latter, their wonderful scheme of killing the Aviator thanks to the intense hate she and the Librarian share seem to have failed. Could this troll ship concreting itself?
P.S.:*slightly whacking the Librarian's head* Stop calling her faker (I'm calm, I'm not using the blade). -
Awwwwwww! by
on 2015-10-29 05:06:00 UTC
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Aviator and Des are adorable. They're both such sweethearts...
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*D'awwwwws at Des and the Aviator* ^_^ by
on 2015-10-29 03:38:00 UTC
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The ending with the two of them was the sweetest part, and it's nice to see that they relate to one another. Especially now that Des has been changed as well.
He offer the two Time Lords an Extendable Ear
Should be "offered". -
Glad you liked it. :) by
on 2015-10-29 04:01:00 UTC
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*quickly fixes the typo* ^^;
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*still relate to one another (nm) by
on 2015-10-29 03:45:00 UTC
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