Subject: Hold up, hold up.
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Posted on: 2015-08-28 23:26:00 UTC

I'm getting a gut feeling you're focusing on the wrong things in your writing. Yes, missions are inherently comedic, at least most of the time... but from what you just described, it feels like you're trying to force that humor with a gimmick. Don't focus on having your agents be "funny", focus on them being well-rounded and suited to a story. Think of them like actual people, not a medium of hilarity. Make a a good character, and let the badfic bring the humor.

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