I can do that. I'll only be able to work on it on Sunday, as I'm dog-sitting from Sunday night to Friday morning, and won't have computer access all that time. If that's acceptable (read: if you trust me to do a good enough beta job in that time frame), then I can do it. You can either email me a Word document to edit, or give me access to leave comments on a GDoc. Email is clickable above.

—doctorlit, eating up his last bit of free time before the dog-sitting dredge