Subject: Re: New mission!
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Posted on: 2017-02-28 19:17:00 UTC
The scene change where they land in the back of the limo was a bit confusing, but I don't know how to fix it. Also, the igor is standing?
I was very confused because I have no idea what Persona 4 is.
Other than that, it's not a bad story. I liked the part where they were suffering because of purple prose.
Where Marina and Richard are sent to take care of a glitterbag in the Backside of the Canon of Persona 4.
The scene change where they land in the back of the limo was a bit confusing, but I don't know how to fix it. Also, the igor is standing?
I was very confused because I have no idea what Persona 4 is.
Other than that, it's not a bad story. I liked the part where they were suffering because of purple prose.