Subject: Okay then.
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Posted on: 2017-02-25 19:49:00 UTC
Bad punctuation, a romantic plot tumor, generic doomsday villains, gratuitous Japanese, protagonist-centered morality, and a deus ex machina near the end.
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Ojamajo Doremi Badfic by
on 2017-02-24 23:30:00 UTC
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Found a badfic!
it's called Ojamajo Doremi Rise of the Shadows.
The original fic no longer exists, so you'll have to use an MST. You can find the prologue here: http://nobody-kadaj.deviantart.com/art/NerfGuy-Sporkings-OD-RotS-1-511287897?q=gallery%3Anobody-kadaj%2F53021063&qo=8. -
Couple of things by
on 2017-02-25 00:28:00 UTC
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1) As far as I'm aware, we don't spork MSTs, and I think that sporking something that's been taken down is bad taste.
2) You don't have to report every single badfic you find to the Board. You can just chuck 'em in the Unclaimed List. -
More constructively: by
on 2017-02-25 07:10:00 UTC
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If you're posting something to the Board - badfic or otherwise - it's great to do it in a way that invites the most discussion. A single link doesn't do much of that, so why not take the time to tell us what's bad about it? If you can work in a question - say, if there's an aspect of it you think might be difficult to PPC, you could ask about that- that's even better, but I know it's not always possible.
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Okay then. by
on 2017-02-25 19:49:00 UTC
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Bad punctuation, a romantic plot tumor, generic doomsday villains, gratuitous Japanese, protagonist-centered morality, and a deus ex machina near the end.
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I'm intrigued by 'protagonist-centred morality'. by
on 2017-02-27 09:22:00 UTC
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Do you mean 'anything the protagonist does is right, even if it's wrong'? 'cause that's kinda messed up.
I'm also amused by the description 'romantic plot tumor'.
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Okay, so... by
on 2017-02-28 13:50:00 UTC
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At one point, the villains kill little girls. This is, of course, treated as horrifying. At another, a super-powered hero kills some little girls. This is not treated as horrifying.
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Not the MST by
on 2017-02-25 02:55:00 UTC
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- We aren't sporking the MST. We're sporking the fic.
2. Sorry...
- We aren't sporking the MST. We're sporking the fic.