Subject: As I've already said, this is quite good
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Posted on: 2017-02-14 17:47:00 UTC

One of the best things about this is how clearly everyone's emotions come through. Specifically, you do a good job of showing me the inside of Ix's head (which is not a very nice place) without it being overblown. The second half, where Ix realizes the truth, is very moving and heartwarming, and it looks like things'll be looking up for the two of them.

In other words, going off the text, Ix is will on her way to getting all the love and hugs she desperately needs.

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