I'm working on a crossover on FFN, and one of my readers basically told me that he was inspired to write a story in the same style. I looked over at his profile--and found that his writing needs help. I already spoke to him about it, and he's willing to accept some concrit, or even a beta, for his story.

If anyone is familiar with Bakugan: Battle Brawlers, or if you're good at giving concrit and aren't averse to doing some research on the Bakugan Wiki, could you please hop over and give a hand? I would gladly do so myself, but I know that once I start meddling, I'd go all-in and start betaing: not something I think that I have the time for at this point.

The fic: Bakugan Plan B by Bakuganfan01

Summary: New Vestroia is in danger! Aliens who call themselves "Vestals" have invaded New Vestroia and enslaved almost all Bakugan. Drago decides to immediately call the Brawlers for help. Will they save New Vestroia?

From what I could gather after skimming the first chapter, it appears to be an AU of New Vestroia (the second season) with some elements of Gundalian Invaders (the third season) mixed in. So far, I've caught
* script format
* numerals instead of words, and
* underdescribed settings.

If anyone is willing to help, please feel free to shoot him a PM, and tell him that son-of-heaven176 (note the dashes instead of underscores) sent you. Thank you.