Subject: Very enjoyable!
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Posted on: 2012-12-03 05:07:00 UTC

I remember TooManySecrets' recruitment some months ago! It's very nice to see him again.

This is a very solid piece in my opinion. The action flows very well and the console / Luxury-related humour got some giggles out of me. The story length is perfect: neither too long or too short and gets its point across with no "stagnent" spots. I also like that tie-in with Huinesoron's Message. It's always nice to see other bits of HQ life being referenced in a spinoff.

I didn't get much of a feel for TooManySecrets' character, though. His role in this short story was pretty much limited to "beleaguered DoSAT techie has to work with Luxury breathing (a bit too close) down his neck", but then again, how else can any self-respecting agent behave around her?

Nitpick aside, excellent work. I look forward to seeing this DoSAT techie again.

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