I felt like hugging Sergio, if I wasn't afraid he'd shoot me. And Luxury was fun, as usual. The same goes for the mission proper. While I don't know the canon, I could follow pretty well.

The only thing that confused me a bit was the fact that I couldn't always tell who was talking.

Also, special mention goes to Luxury being written as more than a generic sex fiend.

I really like what you've done to her, giving her a bit more depth beyond the HQ Ditz That Shags All Living Things. It's refreshing.

As for the guessing game, I noted that Sergio was a PMC, sooo...
Vera's a Sue, the PMC he works for was some sort of freelance Sue Slaying company, and Vera-Sue killed his partner around the same time the PPC sent Agents to deal with the Sue as well?

Or perhaps he was in a canon as an extra in some sort of military company, and a Sue got written in...

Intriguing - I look forward to finding out more about Agent!Sergio's background.

This mission reminds me that I really need to sit down and watch Nanoha. I know enough about it to understand missions in its 'verse, but still!

(also, this one reminded me that Luxury is to stay at least three portals away from my agents at all times. :P That's if I have anything to say about it though...)

... I meant that I kinda want to read your guessing.

I liked the laser beam eyes bit.

"If I could fire lasers from my eyes, I would make your head ex-F***ING-PLODE!" - SC, Specs and Co. canon, seconds before such events occurred.

What can I say? Incendiary vision is hilarious.