Subject: Badfic
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Posted on: 2016-12-20 03:45:00 UTC
Kingdom of Monsters (Badfic, MLP): https://www.fimfiction.net/story/217535/kingdom-of-monsters
Subject: Badfic
Author:
Posted on: 2016-12-20 03:45:00 UTC
Kingdom of Monsters (Badfic, MLP): https://www.fimfiction.net/story/217535/kingdom-of-monsters
Red fic, blue fic.
I shared all this with the chat, and I thought I ought not deprive the Board. So, I recently got into Supernatural (just started season 3, no spoilers plz), and so naturally I went trolling for fanfic, like you do. I've found one quite good one and one mind-bendingly bad one, which Iximaz may or may not be claiming, I'm not sure.
Good news first:
"Bad Fairy" by vanillafluffy, rated T. Supernatural x House, M.D. x The Burning Zone
Summary: Halloween, 1989. Sam's sudden illness may have been caused by the demon John is tracking. A young doctor named House thinks otherwise. SPN House MD crossover.
Why I Like It: Young!House, baby!Winchesters, and good medical jargon. It's a fun read, and I was sad when it ended.
Now the bad news:
"Tangled" by claudia1, rated M. Supernatural x Junior
Summary: After a curse and a night of sex with his brother Dean falls pregnant. Only Sam doesn't remember that night or the curse. currently being re-written. chapters 1-18 rewritten, beta'd. Chapter seven and sixteen is new. mpreg.
Why It's Awful: Wincest and MPreg, both poorly justified; logic with holes you could drive a truck through; godawful SPaG, especially after the beta'd chapters; angsty!stereotypical-pregnant-woman!Dean and everybody else OOC, too. For instance, Dean actually tells Arbogast and Heese about the existence of the supernatural and his relationship with his brother, and they just calmly accept all of it. I think Iximaz commented at one point that Sam was so far from in character that he might as well be on the starship Enterprise with Draco from "My Immortal." Unless she was talking about John, our Designated Willfully Ignorant Bastard du fic. Either way. Oh, and a special alas and alack for poor "Booby" Singer, our Unrealistically Encouraging Pillock du fic.
So yeah, have fun with those, and of course feel free to share anything you've run across lately, good or bad. {= )
~Neshomeh
Kingdom of Monsters (Badfic, MLP): https://www.fimfiction.net/story/217535/kingdom-of-monsters
Britannia (Has a mature warning)- "Britannia is a country three times the size of Texas between America and England in the Atlantic. She and America were both found by Britain about the same time and have many similarities; making them best friends. However, what will happen when she starts to develop feelings for the American over the years? Pairings: America x OC Country and more throughout"
a 56 chapter hetalia fanfic(only 38 chapters towards the main mary sue the rest are for poorly defined state ocs) About an Island nation that is meant to be 3 times the size of Texas in between America and England in the ocean. When the distance between the two nations is about 4,242 mi/6826.837km. Texas's size is about 268,597 mi² or 695663.036km. So basically there is more of a chance the oc ends up connecting the two together and swallowing up a lot of the North Atlantic Islands instead of just being an Island nation.
The oc basically is a copy of Arthur in looks and Alfred in personality. But that's not even the worst. This fanfic includes things like:
-Incest between the canon Alfred(representing America) and the oc who is raised as his sibling.
-The oc takes a canon's name (Britannia is the name of England,Ireland,Wales,Scotland,and North Ireland's mother whose implied to have died)
- The oc attempting to show how morally right she is when it comes to slavery only to shove them back onto the ship with no supplies or even checking if they are okay to travel.
- cw: rape The mary sue lets Alfred get pulled away by Greece(whose reduced to two character traits) while she thinks Greece is going to rape someone. And does nothing to help her brother/guy she loves while eating cake hoping that wasn't his first time. It turns out Greece meant sleeping as in taking a nap.
- She has her people completely listen to her minus the Designated Bastards both Misogynistic and classic
- Somehow has perfect hair all the time and Emerald eyes.
- The grass in the sue nation glows.
- The mary sue enters wars her country isn't fighting and is somehow a perfect spy
- Ignores historical and canon relationships in time periods.
- Changes history only when it benefits the sue or makes the sue look good. And flat out ignores some parts.
- Claims a vote was a tie when it was said a few sentences earlier the vote was only close but not a tie. And somehow is the tie breaker despite the fact nations don't do that.
- All the ocs that are made by the creator exist to support the sue or the author's world view.
- So many canons are OOC to the point there are at least two replacements.
- The sue copies the USA government exactly for her government. Down to even using the dollar.
- mary sue claiming Nations can basically.
The secret and the Slytherin -Trapped in her time Kagome is sent to live with her father. What adventures await her in the magical school of Hogwarts? Will she be friends with the golden trio and what role does Malfoy play in the complicated life of this young miko?
Kagome is replaced. There is a mary sue house elf. And somehow Kagome,whose fully Japanese,is the daughter of Lucius whose white.
Includes:
-Kagome somehow always having known her real father was Lucius.
- Draco instantly accepting her
- A wand being made out of a demon fang being given to replacement Kagome.
- A Tattoo turns into a Demon wolf when Voldemort tries to give her the dark mark
Gasm Heard Round the World (NSFW VERY NSFW. Also pretty NSFB): HAHAHAHA okay little backstory.... Maru-sha and i have been rping as NYC and Cali for sometime, and last night's five hour convo was by far the MOST EPIC convo of all!!!
pretty much started by skyping each other while i was watching yaoi and then all hell broke loose XD
this convo had everything! lesbos, boy love, hardcore yaoi, phone sex, threesome, drinking, virgins, France..... it has everything!
so basically it's about how NYC ends up being no longer a virgin, and Cali getting everything on camera (cause she makes porn for a living XD)
Basically an rp turned into a fanfic with terrible ocs and OOC france.
- Script formatting
- An oc putting in Boku no Pico (underaged porn do not look up) willingly and liking it.
- Mary sue having phone sex with a canon after watching Boku no Pico
- Oc of Louisiana is a copy of Aph France
- Aph France is so OOC it's a replacement.
- Phrases like " stiffened Eiffel Tower" and " Hudson Bay"
- Even for Porn without a plot it's bad.
I've never actually seen Junior before, though, so if I were to tackle "Tangled", it would need to be a teamup.
One that I am claiming, however, thanks to Matt Cipher pointing it in my direction...
"The Creator
Summary:She is the creator of Vampires, Werewolves, and Shape-shifters. She is going to meet the Volturi, the Cullen's, the Denali's, and the Quileute wolves. Putting fear into the fearless Volturi and making her on rules. Bringing back someones mate and another's sister. Athanasia is powerful and a born leader... full summary inside. *The Twilight Saga belongs to Stephenie Meyer...
I don't think I need to say why this one's so terrible. Basically, this is the God of the Twilightverse. Ix and Charlotte are gonna have fun with this...
Yeah, no, you don't get to up and declare yourself the Creator. Sheesh.
Also, "Wearwolfs." All the werewolves in this fic are gonna be regular people going around in wolf skins, aren't they? That or they're wearing very confused living wolves. {= P
I'd have to watch Junior again myself if I were going to take "Tangled," which I'm not. Despite being a crossover, I don't think that's the fic's main problem. -_-;
~Neshomeh
That sounds absolutely hilarious. They could trade looks, roll their eyes, look like they want to run off to chase that tasty thing that just went by, steal the Sue's food...Oh, the possibilities :D
~DF