Subject: New mini-interlude!
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Posted on: 2016-12-05 21:31:00 UTC
Charlotte and VJ bump into each other in the hallways and decide to discuss business.
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New mini-interlude! by
on 2016-12-05 21:31:00 UTC
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Nitpicks (again). by
on 2016-12-09 17:52:00 UTC
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It would have to be pretty freakin’ bad one if they had to put assassins and god slayers together.
Missing word "a"?
She then pointed one finger and Charlotte and leaned in.
Should be "at"?
Come on, you’ve got one part of your new self done, time to enjoy rest of your day off!
Missing word "the"?
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Those are on me, apologies. (nm) by
on 2016-12-09 19:30:00 UTC
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