Subject: New interlude!
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Posted on: 2016-10-30 03:12:00 UTC
Ix and Charlotte have a fight, and Ix makes a new 'friend'.
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New interlude! by
on 2016-10-30 03:12:00 UTC
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Once it's been rewritten, the interlude will be back up. (nm) by
on 2016-10-31 16:10:00 UTC
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Interlude has been deleted. (nm) by
on 2016-10-30 18:50:00 UTC
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Interesting! by
on 2016-10-30 04:42:00 UTC
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Jacques' first official appearance, yay! I love that guy.
I really like Ix's character. Becoming an immortal werewolf sounds like an interesting challenge for anyone. I'm not quite familiar with Starcatchers, so can I ask what the exact extent of Ix's new powers are going to be?
Also, the interaction between Ix and Jacques is great. Jacques is about the perfect character for Ix to talk to about this new development, and I'm eager to see if more interaction between them happens in the future! -
Thanks, but it doesn't matter. Retcons are incoming. by
on 2016-10-30 05:44:00 UTC
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PC pointed out that having two agents becoming Speshul from the same author is Not Cool and I'll be taking the mission down and probably going to rewrite the interlude with Dawn
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Those quotation marks around 'friend' were highly misleading by
on 2016-10-30 03:34:00 UTC
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Especially considering that it turned out to be Jacques... ahem.
It's really nice to see Jacques fleshed out a bit, since he's been given an offhand mention a few times.Though the lack of flirting disappointed me...Right, sorry. It was a nice, thoughtful piece, and I'm glad that Ix and Charlotte made up at the end, too. They might have only been together a week, but I really love that they actually talk about their issues and work things through and in general act like a healthy couple instead of so many other fictional pairings.