Wow, that was bad. The fic, not the mission! The mission was great, as usual. It was fun to see Charlotte get so excited over RWBY weapons, and adopting Polly was wonderful.

On to comments!

1. You say that the explanation for Jaune getting his own room is an "unequal number of students." I think a better word choice would be "uneven."

2. How many beers were involved? I don't know that much about alcohol, or the ages of the characters in RWBY (teens is quite a range), but I doubt one beer would get Jaune as drunk as he's implied to be. Let's email Rooster Teeth to ask about alcohol content in RWBY, we need to settle this once and for all. :-)

Lemons here are horrid, plot nonsensical, drags Jaune in the mud... Thanks fr that, especially by showing an actual, happy and working couple sporking that.

Kudos for the name of the mission too.

And now my ship has been upgraded with cannons! :D

Caught one misspell though:

"“Hang on,” Charlotte said, “Oxpin and Goodwitch are watching the entire forest(...)"

I'm still chuckling about the Slim Jim part.

There are a lot of inappropriate cat jokes on my mind about than ending, but I shall not! Not about Ix and Charlotte, 'cause they're adorable together.