Very late congratulations! by
Akrinor
on 2016-10-01 09:50:00 UTC
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May the two of you always find happiness with each other.
Couple of minor SPaG corrections. . . by
Cat-on-the-Keyboard
on 2016-09-27 04:57:00 UTC
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I mean, CONGRATULATIONS!!! Wow!
But also, I do mean minor SPaG corrections (this still counts as a PPC story, right? It's still supposed to be reviewed, right?
In the post:
you will find moment between Lady Iximaz and Aegis? A moment, perhaps? Or did you mean "moment" in the Elizabethan sense of "importance"(e.x. Hamlet III.i.94)? It's a little grammatically iffy, but in the over-dramatic faux-medieval way that Plort often is.
In the story:
Aegis sheathed his own blade, saying “Something from the kitchens, then. Based on your placement of punctuation with regard to quotation marks, I am assuming that you use United States SPaG conventions. To be consistent, there should be a comma after "saying."
She squeezed his fingers in silent reassurance, and together, they set off for the keep. If I'm understanding the Purdue OWL correctly, there should be another comma before "together" because the word is nonessential to the clause (in that you could have put it on the end of the sentence or left it out and the sentence would still be coherent, not because I think your being "together" isn't important! ^.^). I'm not terribly sure about this, so if anyone wants to discuss it that would be appreciated.
Non-SPaG-related concerns:
You two are far too cute together. D'awww and congratulations again.
--Key is procrastinating on writing an essay, but also genuinely happy for you two.
Congratulations! by
palindromordnilap
on 2016-09-25 13:22:00 UTC
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(Also, hey, November 23's my birthday!)
Well, congratulations! by
Huinesoron
on 2016-09-25 07:40:00 UTC
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(Also: November 23rd? I see what you did there, you crazy people. ^_^)
hS
Congratulations! by
VixenMage
on 2016-09-24 17:27:00 UTC
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May you both have many years of happiness to come!
Well how about that. Congrats, you two! by
Badger421
on 2016-09-24 11:58:00 UTC
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I'd say more but I'm far too busy grinning like an idiot right now.
Wha... W-what... Haaa?! by
Matt Cipher
on 2016-09-24 10:22:00 UTC
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!!!!!!!! by
KittyEden
on 2016-09-24 07:30:00 UTC
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Congrats! (Also the story was adorable, thanks!)
Both of you, congratulations! by
Hardric
on 2016-09-24 06:53:00 UTC
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I wish you the best, both in World One and any other 'verse. And if you want black-hole coffee or cakes involving black-hole coffee, call me.
Congratulations to you both! by
son_of_heaven176
on 2016-09-24 05:33:00 UTC
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So, if I may be so bold as to ask: when did you two first meet IRL?
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE by
S.M.F.
on 2016-09-24 02:31:00 UTC
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Needless to say, I wish you both the best. :>
Whoooooa. by
Larfen J. Stocke, esq
on 2016-09-24 02:02:00 UTC
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Bloody legendary, that. Rare stuff.
Hope it all goes well!
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!! by
The Skarmory who Says Squee
on 2016-09-24 01:47:00 UTC
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CONGRATULATIONS TO YOU BOTH! I look forward to seeing where this goes in the future, both in Plort and in World One! :D
I wish you both the best by
Data Junkie
on 2016-09-24 01:34:00 UTC
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Unless I am misunderstanding in which case ignore me entirely.