Subject: Beta readers wanted
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Posted on: 2016-08-20 16:39:00 UTC

I've recently finished a mission in Lord of the Rings (and, technically, The Legend of Zelda as well), and I'd like a few sets of eyes to look over it. As usual, I'm looking for advice on internal consistency, flow, and humor; not as usual, I'd like some advice on alternate assassination methods for the Sue. As of now, she literally dies through Deus Ex Machina, which feels anticlimactic regardless of how ironic it is.

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