Subject: Elevator pitches - a novel-editing survey
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Posted on: 2018-06-13 14:59:00 UTC

You know what I'm rubbish at? Editing. For some reason, while I can churn out a novel-length story (on five occasions, in under 30 days), I have a nightmare of a time trying to sit down and edit it into something worth having - or, for instance, worth publishing (that long-time dream of any writer).

Part of the reason is that, well, publishing a novel sounds hard. If I plunge myself into editing (which often = completely rewriting), only for no-one to ever read it... what's the point?

So we come to this thread, a neat weaponisation of elevator pitches in the war against apathy. Below are titles, first lines, and five-second summaries of each of my four candidate novels (they're all NaNos, so they all exist as ~50K-word stories). What I'm hoping you will do is read through them, click on the link to the survey, and select which of the four you'd be most likely to read if it was published. :) (It's literally just the one question - no name or anything. Takes about ten seconds.)

And then what I'm hoping you'll do is write up your own title-firstline-elevatorpitch post, scrape together a Google Form, and post it so that I (and everyone else) can say what we think of your ideas. And maybe that'll inspire you, too, to get down to some heavy editing, and eventually seeing your name on the cover of a paperback down at the local bookshop. :)




The Next Great Wizard

The world is a mirror – you only get out what you put in, it's prone to deceiving the unwary eye, and sometimes you can walk straight through it. Or is that just me?

Portal fantasy. A young man falls into a fantasy world behind the mirrors, where he is hailed as the Next Great Wizard of prophecy. Or possibly as the new Dark Lord. Only time will tell.

The Kraken-Knights of Wintertide

The sky-farms lay blue under the sun, waiting for the harvest.

Fantasy. Magical war with flying giant squid, medieval warlord Santa, and lots of puns.

The Words of the Voice

Out of nothing, the Voice spoke Itself.

Science-based creation myth written in pseudo-scriptural style, with commentary by one member of an extremely fractious fictional academic community.

Gravity's Embrace

She sauntered towards me, wearing nothing but a smile and three thousand tonnes of warship.

Soft sci-fi. The pilot of an experimental spaceship is kidnapped, and then he and his abductor are both kidnapped again - but no-one seems to know precisely what experiments his ship was running. Least of all himself.

The Survey - Which one do you like the look of?

hS

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