Best birthday gift ever! by
S.M.F.
on 2018-05-31 16:07:00 UTC
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Though I expect the timing had nothing to do with that anyway. |D
And it's very plain how much effort the two teams are making on balancing themselves - trying to be aware of themselves and each other. And then still pushing the buttons that are just out of sight. (Also, Ix deserves hugs - on his terms - but we knew that already. ;) )
Also... oh gods, the robot biology in this fic. >.< There are just some lines! Slightly mitigated by Charlotte's rhyme, but still.
I also had no idea who Penny was, but I still felt near-crying after what happened to her in the fic, so that scene was sold quite well. So was Serendipity's moment during the first charge scene.
In short: I love this mission, despite not knowing much personally about either canon.
Did spot one thing, though: "Charlotte sighed and stood up, holding out her hands to pull Ix to her feet. “Less chance of dying, you mean.""