G'day fellas, ya boy Larfo over here needs some betawork done for the second story of Flaming Broomsticks.

I need to know if it's TRASH or NOT, and have SPAG SORTED OUT, and to SEE if parts are FUNNY or NOT and how I can make them FUNNIER, and SO ON and SO FORTH.

I've had this story lingering around the back of my Google Drive for yonks, and, man, I gotta get it out. It's starting to smell.

I believe you can click my name to access my email thingy and so forth, but, uh, in case I did something wrong - iammisc1 @ gmail . com
(Remove all the spaces, of course)

Cheers anyhow!