Subject: Re: interlude (spoilers)
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Posted on: 2018-01-25 03:19:00 UTC

I always love seeing more of the Musée, and of Lorelai and Dr. Cornelius. This new type of "mission," as it were, is very unique, and I like that there's an element of difficulty to it without making it dangerous or tense. Good use of Ekyl's character, and of the younglings. A lot of their questions were quite amusing!

I also like that you found a way to give both Jocasta and Cator screen time, and then honor them with statues and the name wall at the end. Aside from being nice from our out-of-universe perespective, it feels like the sort of thing Dr. Cornelius would do. (Or maybe that part is Lorelai's contribution?)

A long typo ago:
The dimly-lid corridor behind the shelf led to an equally-dim flight of stairs.

—doctorlit, too old to be trained as a Jedi

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