There were a good few funny moments throughout (the entirely "doggy style" thing, Ave teasing Zeb about Jacques, the "domestic" part, the superhero landing part), the execution method was clever, and the framing with Elanor's tantrums was neat. The whole thing felt TOS-y.

- Tomash

That's ridiculous. You've been here about five minutes, or possibly forever, but definitely not four years. That's a silly number.

Of course, 'ninety missions' is also a pretty ludicrous number...!

hS

I offer my sympathies for the tantrum.I don't have memories of this, but my yougest brother could be an handful when he was at that age.

'Plus' side of being sparklepire: At least chances of durable hurting are considerably weaker? Dunno if that's enough though.

Noodle Incident sense twitching. The mystery always mean they're juicy.

Valuable brain space, uh? *Thinks about these bad cartoon and diverse tidbits refusing to just go away even after years* Lesser sort here, but oh yes, brain can be weird that way.

*Raspy Sidious-like voice* Do it, Zeb. Ask about that position. You know you absolutely do not want to.

You know, I like using disguises to catch the glitterbag unaware, but I never really thought about using it to deliver the charge list in an unsuspiscious way before. Would you mind terribly if I shamelessly steal respectfully borrow this great idea?

Oooh, Elanor is fan of Equestria Girls? Repeat after me, little girl: Sunset Shimmer is best human and best pony.

Nice mission to read. Also, do you have any preference for the cake, or will black-holechocolate and red berries will do?