Subject: Beta Request
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Posted on: 2017-12-07 22:56:00 UTC
I think my Permission paper is finished, but I'm not feeling too confident about it. Is there anyone who can take a look at this?
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Beta Request by
on 2017-12-07 22:56:00 UTC
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I... don't know how to send the thing. by
on 2017-12-10 06:14:00 UTC
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Do I just... throw it here?
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Bl01B1KsRROA7xPcSBPvHviD4EAhhH-hB0dm5axJIbg/edit?usp=sharing -
Yeah, you could have emailed me the link. by
on 2017-12-10 11:10:00 UTC
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So now I got it and I'll give it a shot.
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Email, usually. (nm) by
on 2017-12-10 08:47:00 UTC
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Re: Beta Request by
on 2017-12-09 16:02:00 UTC
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I'd be happy to give it a look over for readability and to give you a second set of eyes on it (or at the very least, some friendly encouragement), but you've probably seen I'm still pretty in the dark about how the way things are run here.
If you're okay with that and interested, let me know and I can link you to my contact information.
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on 2017-12-08 00:00:00 UTC
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I've been lurking at the wiki for a while, but I don't know what the PG's are looking for. My check would probably be more "obvious things you miss because you've read it too many times."
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What the PGs are looking for. by
on 2017-12-08 09:17:00 UTC
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-Good writing.
... what you wanted more? ^_^
-Good SPaG.
-An understanding of both the setting and spirit of the PPC.
-Characters who come across as three-dimensional and interesting to read about, and fit in with their supposed backgrounds.
-A story that reads like a story, not half a scene cribbed from a larger work.
-Reasonable reactions to events around them (ie, character-driven rather than plot-driven).
-Other stuff like that.
Oh, and:
-400-800 words per prompt.
-A BRIEF bio for each character that tells us the relevant things we CAN'T get from the prompts.
-BribesGifts for the PG. :D :D :D (No, not really.)
hS