Subject: Eeee.
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Posted on: 2017-12-10 20:36:00 UTC

How lovely. Thank you so much! :)

Re: #1, I like that she's in armor. Can't say that's at all the armor I was picturing, partly because my primary armor ideas come from Tamora Pierce and King Arthur (though not exclusively--it's just what I reach for automatically). However, looking at the list of places that type of armor was worn? Perfect. It includes the RL equivalent of the area where she trained. I don't know if that was on purpose or not, but if it wasn't, I like the coincidence.

#3...well, she has a short braid because at the point when I wrote that description I had a short braid. I also wanted to separate her from Dawn a little. Of course, if she's reflecting my current look her hair should be about earlobe length in the back and an inch or so longer in the front, but that's a development of only a few months ago. The braid works.

#4: Muaha. Good going :P

And miscellaneous: I really like the lettering. Of all things to focus on, I know, but...it's very nice.

All in all, thanks for doing this!

~Z

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