Hey PPC board if anyone remembers me I'm finally writing again after over a year of creative comatose...

decided it'd be a good idea to try and write a play manuscript for the first time ever lol...

any suggestions? not sure how i felt about 6/9's romance... lol

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gmmSEwYY-iCxmSH0E3u-h3XjTmd2T-5ys6R6Zc6LyFY/edit?usp=sharing