Subject: Permission...
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Posted on: 2019-04-09 12:32:00 UTC

Granted!

I recognize your name and I approve of sporking old shames—it's a good start.

I like your characters. That's the main thing that I really have to say, because I found that the most interesting. I think it'll be cool to see how these two interact, and both of them coming from the same canon should result in some interesting conversations. There's plenty of potential for conflict between the two of them, but also plenty of potential for them to also become closer over time. and the two don't need to be mutually exclusive, either. Thumbs up.

As for the writing: your SPaG looks good, and the ending to the first prompt especially made me laugh out loud.

And now I'm imagining Chenille as an Angora rabbit after the brushing scene. This is never going to leave my head.

Anyway, yeah—congrats on a job well done, and I look forward to your missions. :)

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