Subject: Good to see the TCDA again
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Posted on: 2012-11-02 03:00:00 UTC

I liked them all, but my favourite story from the set was definitely 'Ten Feet Tall'. That's certainly one way of making sure your request for a raise doesn't get conveniently misfiled and then forgotten about! Also a particularly awesome song, so thank you for bringing it to my attention.

'Fairytail' also caught my attention, the description of the materialisation sounds seemed vaguely familiar and I was trying to work out what they referred to. The blue box was quite a big clue :)

One thing I did notice was a bit of dialogue that seemed odd to me, in 'Storybook', Serenity says '"If we could only we could walk together in Nouvelle-Caledonie, dine at Aujourd'hui, watch the stars burn in their crysalline spheres..." ' (emphasis added). Either 'If only we could walk together...' or 'If we could only walk together...' would make sense, but having 'we could' in there twice just seems a little odd to me. Although I don't know Serenity/Selene's character well enough to know if she has what I would consider odd speech patterns.

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