Subject: Me too!
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Posted on: 2018-11-02 21:02:00 UTC

I've tried to get started several years, but never even got in the first day of writing. But this year I did, so I'm very excited!

I'm actually cracking down on a fanfiction, Kathryn's Adventures in Middle-Earth (a stand-in title), which is, as you may have guessed, a girl in Middle-earth story. It's not satire; I've set myself the challenge of taking this premise and taking it seriously.

I've set myself a couple of other challenges as well; I generally avoid first-person narration because it's hard for me to get into characters' heads, but this will be told in the form of a series of letters from the titular Kathryn to her mother, who is presumably still alive and well in the real world. I used to write a lot of letters as a kid, so I thought it would be easier than straight-up first person. So far I'm discovering it's really not.

I also discovered today that because the first half of the letters are written with some time between the events and the writing and the second half are written more or less immediately after the events, character development is a difficult thing to show. Some of it is happening days, weeks, or even months before they're written about and the narrator will be somewhat aware of it. Some of it, though, is happening in the immediate past and it's unlikely she's going to realize how she's changing and growing. One thing I'm trying to work in is self-contradiction. Earlier this year I read the diaries of Christopher Columbus and it was fascinating to see how his viewpoint changed as time went on. As an example, in earlier entries he thought of aloe as a very valuable commodity and gathered as much of it as he could. Later entries, though, referred to it as a very commonplace thing and he stopped collecting it. I suspect this is because he discovered how common it is in that part of the world. This is naturally never overtly acknowledged in the writing of the diary, but the diligent reader can pick it up. I'm hoping to capture a similar quandary in Kathryn's letters, for the purposes of both realism and character development.

But then, I probably shouldn't be thinking of this too much at this stage. It's just the first draft. Still, if I manage to pull it off properly, I think the letter format will be one of the great strengths of the story.

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