What a fun read! I especially enjoyed Officer/Spy Rooney's dry sort of humor (and, with an ex-cop/Deputy Sheriff/Sheriff/bailiff for a grandfather, am rather pleased to see someone from law enforcement taking up the flash patch!)

Curses, I told myself three missions and an interlude before I think about making any more agents, and all this DoI love isn't making me any more patient! I wanna make a spy...

Always good to see Intelligence reports popping up, especially when they help to develop the Intelligence Officers as well. Are you planning to kill the fic at a later date as well?

You've definitely made a whole lot of excellent additions to your Intel report: background info, thoughts, and good descriptions of what's going wrong. It's short, but that's to be expected with a report format.

A good read overall. Spiffing job!

Glad to see you'll be featuring more of Rooney in future episodes. As I said before, he sounds like a really nice guy.







*Wipes tear from eye* Look at that. The DoI is slowly gaining popularity...