Subject: Ian had resorted...
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Posted on: 2013-11-04 20:51:00 UTC

... to curling up on the spot in a ball of plush ivory spines. He now looked up, realized he was alone, and with a confused whimper scooted behind Ilraen's forehooves.

Ilraen wasn't quite sure what to make of this, but Jenni appeared speechless with disbelief at what she'd just heard, so he filled in, picking up where Xericka had left off. <Furthermore, a Lovecraftian horror would not seem to be an appropriate vehicle for the delivery of candy. You must control your pets as well as yourselves, Agents.> His irritated stare had twice the eyeballs behind it, not to mention the long, scythe-like blade at the end of his tail. Even though it was fitted with his AHAIRQ safety sheath at the moment, it was quite fortunate for Fatu-Gun that the Andalite was no longer as twitchy as he had been in his early years as a Protector.

"Yeah!" Ian contributed, feeling much bolder back with the group. "Too scary!"

"Too scary," Henry agreed with a sniffle, peeking out from behind his mom's legs.

Jenni shook her head as if to clear it. "All right. It's okay now, guys. They won't scare you again." She knelt down and gave the two little dragons each a hug. "All better?"

They seemed to accept this, so she stood again. "May I just say, lines of dialogue from different speakers in the same paragraph? Ouch. A lot of agents can hear that sort of thing, you know. You want to watch the run-ons, too."

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