Subject: I can check for SPaG and flow.
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Posted on: 2012-10-02 04:00:00 UTC
You can reach me at expertmechanic [at] yahoo [dot] ca.
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Betas? by
on 2012-10-02 02:55:00 UTC
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I've recently completed a Madoka Magica mission. Sergio Turbo kindly checked it over for canon-ness, so I'd like it if someone could check it over for plotholes, SPAG, and general writing style and plot-flowing.
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Borrowing your thread to request a DOI beta... by
on 2012-10-02 23:39:00 UTC
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So I just finished writing DOI report for Officer Rooney (we recruited him from one of Christianne and Eledhwen's missions). Could I get a DOI person to look it over for me?
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*Flails wildly* by
on 2012-10-03 05:32:00 UTC
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Ooh! Ooh! I can do this! I can check for flow and plotholes in the mission, as well as offer my interpretation of how the DoI works.
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Chuck me an email, then? by
on 2012-10-03 06:36:00 UTC
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I went more or less by the template on the wiki; rather bare bones but I'm just pretty much testing waters so yeah!
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All right... by
on 2012-10-03 06:49:00 UTC
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You can find me at expertmechanic [at] yahoo [dot] ca.
Did you get the link to the (Un)Intelligence beta? I think I sent it to your Gmail but it might have been lost in transit: my Yahoo's been acting weird lately. -
I got it and skimmed it; still trying to come up with... by
on 2012-10-03 06:50:00 UTC
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comments that aren't just "kjdf;lkadjf;lkjlkj THIS IS AMAZING GO ON GO ON GO ON" so yeah.
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Well... by
on 2012-10-02 10:30:00 UTC
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If you need my meagre help, I'm happy to serve. I believe you have my mail.
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Sorry... by
on 2012-10-03 01:14:00 UTC
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My computer's being glitchy (at least, the one that has the copy of your email.)
Could you post it? -
Re: Sorry... by
on 2012-10-03 10:45:00 UTC
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desdendelle AT gmail DOT com.
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If you need another Beta, I'll do it by
on 2012-10-02 08:50:00 UTC
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singingthethunder1@gmail.com
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I can check for SPaG and flow. by
on 2012-10-02 04:00:00 UTC
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You can reach me at expertmechanic [at] yahoo [dot] ca.
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There on a Bear by
on 2012-10-02 03:18:00 UTC
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If you need a Beta, I can do that for you. SeraphWeasel@gmail.com.