I feel like I've maybe said this before on one of your missions, but I'll say it again: I love how much you make this feel like a classic TOS-era mission. Especially impressive considering the NSFW subject matter, which Jay and Acacia and their contemporaries rarely ever touched. But the lust object moment, the getting spotted by canon characters and having to escape, and one partner having to restrain their partner from attacking the Sue early, all classic stuff that I love seeing in modern missions still.

I loved the gag with all the house elves accidentally getting yanked out of the Wizarding World. I also appreciated the assassination method; I have a weird fan love for the lobstrosities, despite what they did to Roland. This was a much more acceptable person for them to be swarming over!

I also liked that you treated the disillusionment and recruitment of Faelwen with an appropriate amount of serious emotion. I know we're primarily a humor community, but sometimes the reality of a situation needs to be apparent on the page. I hope Faelwen and the other elf do well in Headquarters!

—doctorlit, lobstrosity fanboy

That was a lot of fun to read. I like the character dynamic, the creative metaphors that they use, and the epilogue was quite wholesome.

Sometimes I wonder what is wrong with some writers...

It's nice to see the poor ocs rescued, at least.

I really like the improvised Anti-Lustin substitute! Sometimes you just need to remember something very disgusting.

I also appreciate the distinction between OCs and Sues. ^^

Surprised canon wasn't bent enough for "Accio, House-Elf!" to work, or something like that.

And yes, that is SUCH an adorable ending!

Just from reading the mission ... your poor agents.

I'm sending them some Bleeprin and alcohol so they can forget all this.

The epilogue was nice and heartwarming, and I think this is overall a good mission - though I don't really have detailed SPaG comments or the like at the moment.

- Tomash