There's another mission I have queued up, and I'd like someone to take a look at it. It's a Lord of the Rings fic, and not quite as bad as my previous finds, but be warned that it's a DAVD mission, so it does have unpleasant stuff - if anyone wants specific trigger warnings, I'll give them. Also, I've got some debutante characters (one of them, Ruxanda, you might have already met), and I'd like some feedback on their dynamic.