I have to say, I really like the dynamic you have going with these two. They both seem like they'll get along, though there's definitely potential for conflict as well. The prompts made me smile—and the line about how long the cheese has been in the bag made me laugh out loud.

SPaG looked fine. There were no issues that jumped out at me, and your writing flowed naturally enough I didn't have to reread sentences to try and parse them.

You seem to have a solid grasp on the shared universe as well, and the tone of your writing just felt like you've been doing this for a while.

And as for that badfic? Hoo boy. I think my agents would have to buy yours a round of drinks after that mission.

So with all that said—Permission Granted. I can't wait to see Charlie and Jiwon in action together. :)